Sell the dream, make the yes easy. Build the template so every proposal is a warm fill-in.
How to use this: a proposal is not a price list, it's the dream made concrete with an easy way to say yes. Build your template once here, then every future proposal is a fast fill-in you can send warm. Sell the transformation, not the itinerary.
1 · Your template sections (the anatomy of a yes)
open with the discovery, reflected back, so they feel understood
not day-by-day; the kids unplugged, the anniversary that feels like the honeymoon
logistics in service of the dream, not the headline
2 · Your standard options: good, better, best
One price is a yes-or-no wall. Three options changes the question from whether to which. Define your tiers once so you don't rebuild them every time.
Good
Better
Best
3 · Your one clear next step
Never end on "let me know your thoughts." Give one frictionless action and tell them exactly how to take it.
"Reply with your option and I'll send the deposit link" / a book button / a hold link / "grab 15 minutes here to lock it in"
4 · Send it warm
same day or next morning; a good proposal sent warm beats a perfect one sent cold. Build it in Tern from your notes in minutes.
Put your Second Mate to work
Two prompts to try now. The full set is in the library, How to Prompt Your Second Mate. Swap the [brackets] for your details.
Draft the full proposal from my notes
Here are my discovery notes: [PASTE]. Draft a dream-led proposal in my voice [VOICE]: open with their dream in their words, sell the transformation (not the itinerary), then good/better/best options, and end with one clear next step: [YOUR CTA]. Warm, not a price list.
Turn my itinerary into the transformation
Rewrite these flat day-by-day lines as the feeling and the transformation, what the client will experience and who they'll get to be, with logistics underneath: [PASTE ITINERARY]. Keep my voice [VOICE]. No hype, just the dream made vivid.
Marketing Journeys · The Tradewinds Method · We don't hand you a course, we build your business with you. Tern proposal-builder how-to is in the Specialty Library. Stuck? Bring it to Professor Hours, book a 1:1, or hire us.